Review of Windows 7

As a 15 year old guy at high school, I'm at a time where I have to consider my career path for the future. Just recently I decided that I might like to try technical journalism, and so I've written a review of Windows 7 RC, hoping to get constructive feedback on how I've done. There's no point in persuing a career if I'm no good at it!

I'd really appreciate it if you'd check out my review at http://fcreview.wordpress.com/ - any feedback would be appreciated

Thanks!

I think you did a pretty thorough job reviewing, although it was a little choppy- you might consider adding some transitions. Also, In the middle to the beginning it kind-of seemed like a review on the computer, not the OS, then towards the end it gets better.

Well, that's my two-bits and overall, you did great! Lol, I liked your Windows ME joke. I'll have to use that sometime. Well, Cheers and Welcome to the forums!

Thanks very much for your comments I'll be sure to take your suggestions into account when I decide to have another go at reviewing something.

The ME joke isn't really mine, I heard it somewhere else years ago and have used it ever since :P

Thanks once again!